An Agented Update
I've been receiving emails and messages from people interested in where things stand with my writing. To be honest, there isn't much to tell — and so much to tell at the same time.
First, Book Two is at a proverbial stand still. Don't be alarmed; it's not what you think. The book is fully outlined and its path is clearly cut. But I've been terribly busy with The Signed Page and the signings and shipping that go with that. Random House also hired me to redesign a writer's website and that has been taking up my last two weeks.
The writer's name, for those of you who are interested, is named David Anthony Durham. He is a historical fiction writer with three books under his belt who is publishing his first epic fantasy in June. Acacia, the first book of a planned trilogy, is being currently lauded as a magnificent book, and I can tell you the man is the same. He is a great guy and I am having fun redesigning his website. Look for it soon at www.davidanthonydurham.com!
Now on to the great news: Song of the Fell Hammer has not been rejected — yet!
Initially I sent the book to a publisher. After three months and I had not received word I sent the book to one of the best agents in the field. He was incredibly busy and could not get to it quickly so I also sent it to another agent at one of my writing friend's suggestions. I awaited word from any of those people, seeing if the professionals would like my book as much as my early readers had.
And as with many things in life, everything started happening at once.
I originally submitted my book to the publisher six months ago. Last month I came to a very zen feeling after spending five months fretting: I realized things would happen as they are meant to happen. I have led my entire life this way but for some reason the inability to let patience lead me to publication irked me and I began to breathe again. I let worry melt from me and I decided to focus my energies in other places.
That is when the first agent contacted me. He wrote me a short note to tell me he had just started reading my book. He was several chapters into it, would spend the next two weeks reading it, but he liked the writing (what I was most worried about) and he liked the story (had some advice on how to strengthen it). After hearing this, I was of course elated; he said he would continue to read and that he thought I had something with some guidance.
A few days later, as I continued to work on the website, the second agent wrote me. The email was a long one. When I had sent her my unbound manuscript, I also sent her a bound galley of the book to share with anyone in her agency. She gave that galley to her assistant and they both read my book at the same time. They both loved it. The agent said "the writing is quite wonderful," and her assistant (who are usually people apprenticed to become editors in the future) said it was "written beautifully." I was elated to get that kind of feedback about my writing style — I've always thought the story was a good one but I was concerned about my writing ability. Just like the first agent, they both had suggestions for how to strengthen the book and remarkably both agents were in synch with one another concerning their advice.
Which means they are right. And I fully agree with both of them. I've known the book needs work — especially the beginning — and I am happy to get that feedback.
The first agent told me to rewrite and resubmit. The second agent said to rewrite, resubmit, and she'd more than likely represent me.
!!!!!!
Just like that.
So, now comes the fun part. I get to go back into Fell Hammer. Just from their advice and thinking about my first book again in depth, the whole first 1/3 of it will be rewritten — it will be tightened up, shortened, dialogue will be added to flesh out the characters a bit more, foreshadowing will be added, etc. I plan on reworking three or four chapters a day and do so through to the end of the book. I think the book will be shorter, it will be crisper, and I hope the characters will dance a little more lively between the black and white lines.
And at the end, it will be a better book.
And I will resubmit it.
And I will have to rewrite again.
And thus the process continues.
Now I have to get back to the website because as soon as that is done I can focus on my dream again!
First, Book Two is at a proverbial stand still. Don't be alarmed; it's not what you think. The book is fully outlined and its path is clearly cut. But I've been terribly busy with The Signed Page and the signings and shipping that go with that. Random House also hired me to redesign a writer's website and that has been taking up my last two weeks.
The writer's name, for those of you who are interested, is named David Anthony Durham. He is a historical fiction writer with three books under his belt who is publishing his first epic fantasy in June. Acacia, the first book of a planned trilogy, is being currently lauded as a magnificent book, and I can tell you the man is the same. He is a great guy and I am having fun redesigning his website. Look for it soon at www.davidanthonydurham.com!
Now on to the great news: Song of the Fell Hammer has not been rejected — yet!
Initially I sent the book to a publisher. After three months and I had not received word I sent the book to one of the best agents in the field. He was incredibly busy and could not get to it quickly so I also sent it to another agent at one of my writing friend's suggestions. I awaited word from any of those people, seeing if the professionals would like my book as much as my early readers had.
And as with many things in life, everything started happening at once.
I originally submitted my book to the publisher six months ago. Last month I came to a very zen feeling after spending five months fretting: I realized things would happen as they are meant to happen. I have led my entire life this way but for some reason the inability to let patience lead me to publication irked me and I began to breathe again. I let worry melt from me and I decided to focus my energies in other places.
That is when the first agent contacted me. He wrote me a short note to tell me he had just started reading my book. He was several chapters into it, would spend the next two weeks reading it, but he liked the writing (what I was most worried about) and he liked the story (had some advice on how to strengthen it). After hearing this, I was of course elated; he said he would continue to read and that he thought I had something with some guidance.
A few days later, as I continued to work on the website, the second agent wrote me. The email was a long one. When I had sent her my unbound manuscript, I also sent her a bound galley of the book to share with anyone in her agency. She gave that galley to her assistant and they both read my book at the same time. They both loved it. The agent said "the writing is quite wonderful," and her assistant (who are usually people apprenticed to become editors in the future) said it was "written beautifully." I was elated to get that kind of feedback about my writing style — I've always thought the story was a good one but I was concerned about my writing ability. Just like the first agent, they both had suggestions for how to strengthen the book and remarkably both agents were in synch with one another concerning their advice.
Which means they are right. And I fully agree with both of them. I've known the book needs work — especially the beginning — and I am happy to get that feedback.
The first agent told me to rewrite and resubmit. The second agent said to rewrite, resubmit, and she'd more than likely represent me.
!!!!!!
Just like that.
So, now comes the fun part. I get to go back into Fell Hammer. Just from their advice and thinking about my first book again in depth, the whole first 1/3 of it will be rewritten — it will be tightened up, shortened, dialogue will be added to flesh out the characters a bit more, foreshadowing will be added, etc. I plan on reworking three or four chapters a day and do so through to the end of the book. I think the book will be shorter, it will be crisper, and I hope the characters will dance a little more lively between the black and white lines.
And at the end, it will be a better book.
And I will resubmit it.
And I will have to rewrite again.
And thus the process continues.
Now I have to get back to the website because as soon as that is done I can focus on my dream again!


6 Comments:
Goodluck with the rewrite, Shawn. I am really looking forward to reading the rest of the story!
-Chris
Shawn,
Keep up the great blog posts. You know I always enjoy reading them!
You should write another philosophical/world-of-writing type blog post, instead of always just waiting for an update. You've got a lot of knowledge in that little head of yours and we all want a piece of it!
hahaha- I'm with Aidan on this one! ;)
Give me a topic and I will. :)
Ok! One that I'm pretty interested in since Editing Fiend mentioned it- The importance of networking and your experience with it.
Ahh, now that's something Shawn can talk about for hours upon hours!
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